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“After Wearing the White Moonlight Stand” is over. Although there may still be extra chapters to write, there are a lot of words that I can no longer hold back, so I will write them first and then take note of them. Let me sort out and reflect on this article a little bit.
Bai Yueguang is the longest and longest article I have written. ORZ started writing it in June 2019 and continued until the end of April 2020, which is nearly a year. Since I ran out of manuscripts shortly after joining V, it was equivalent to running naked for a year, with no weekends or holidays, until I collapsed.
Actually, before Bai Yueguang wrote the essay, I did not expect that his results would be so good.
The fantasy channel in Jinjiang is very cold. I hesitated for a while before writing the article, but finally made up my mind to write this lonely long novel that was destined to be so cold that no one would read it. The results were so good that I was a little surprised myself. Bai Yueguang’s results sometimes make me feel ashamed, because compared with other literature in Jinjiang, it is a bit “morally inappropriate”. Many of the literature I like have sophisticated writing styles, concise vocabulary, lively and humorous language, and the collection often only contains Thousands, and Baiyueguang has too many shortcomings, and the 16w collection is obviously not suitable.
Bai Yueguang is the first time I have written a novel with so many characters and such a long storyline. Like most girls, I would write a few words in a notebook in junior high and high school, and then in 2017, I would write I wrote my first novel “The male protagonist is an old man”. I have been fishing in 17 and 18 years, and I have not seriously updated or written seriously. I will not mention the dark history in the middle_(:з」∠)_I wrote about the disease in 19 When I was young, I started to write daily seriously. In June 2019, I wrote Bai Yueguang. I calculated carefully and found that the only ones I wrote seriously were “The Male Lead Is Old”, “Yandere” and “Bai Yueguang”. As the third book, Bai Yueguang is really inexperienced, and there are many shortcomings reflected in it, such as the characterization of the characters, the conclusion of various branches of the supporting characters, the control of the rhythm, the details of the plot, and the control of the overall situation.^ In the middle I I reflected on it while writing, and I reflected a lot.
1. Writing
I mentioned the writing style on Weibo. Some readers said that Bai Yueguang’s writing style was not as good as my last book “Yandere”. In fact, I intentionally wrote Bai Yueguang in a rough way. Before writing the article, I discussed it with Ji. A friend said that I wanted to write something “rougher” and focus more on the plot rather than the writing and characters.
Before, I pursued a more beautiful and refreshing writing style, but to be honest, I think the plot of the yandere is very weak. Even the character of the little pervert Wei Tansheng is not three-dimensional enough, because I think his character is more ” “False”, without a solid plot as a foundation, the characters must be expressed through the plot, rather than stacking sentences. Now I try to pursue a writing style that has a strong visual sense and can substitute emotions.
I think the writing is good without being arrogant, has a strong visual sense, and can express what I want to express. I have been pursuing this now. Once this is done, it will not be too late to refine the writing style.
However, due to running naked for a year and the intensity of updates, some of Bai Yueguang’s words are indeed not as thoughtful as those of Yandere.
2. Plot
As for the plot, I deeply reflected on myself. Many readers said that Wanmei was too aggrieved and Bai Yueguang was too aggrieved. My point of abuse is really high. Plus, as an author, sometimes I don’t feel aggrieved or abused, but the readers are already **** off. ORZ, I understand that everyone has been working and studying for a day, and life is very hard, so I want to read something cool, but I don’t get enough cool and sweet articles, and I always feel that it’s boring to be cool all the time, so I’m in Bai Yueguang Mr. Li couldn’t help but arrange various ups and downs in the plot. (╯‵□′)╯︵┻━┻In addition, I like to torture characters to create characters. I just like to torture people’s hearts and those tragic feelings, which leads to being called a stepmother. Next time I will try to get along with you. Reader’s brain waves match!
The plot has a lot to say.
I have said more than once that I have no ambition and do not want to write large-scale articles, because I know that I do not have that ability, but readers always come to me and tell me that I have ambition, but my writing skills are not worthy of it.
I don’t have that ambition, really! ! ! Mainly because the role of Wan Mei was born very early. When I was a freshman in high school, I created a character called “Liu Zhewan”. She was the original Wan Mei, and her personality was not much different from now. At that time, Dad , Xiao Pei, Mei Kangping, Demon King Jia Ying, Big Brother and other characters have begun to take shape.
When I was in the first year of high school, I couldn’t help but write something on paper, and I couldn’t help but spread it out, about the battle between good and evil, etc. When I wrote Bai Yueguang, I had to bite the bullet and fill in my first year of high school. Ignorance digs a pit for the battle between good and evil.
Coupled with the influence of Shu Goupei (who has escaped from the trap), he always wants to create many supporting roles that he is passionate about, which leads to the emergence of a series of supporting roles such as Meng Canglang and Senior Sister Bai.
These reasons will inevitably lead to the frame of the article becoming larger, and I don’t want to write group portraits or a big picture, so I had difficulty in arranging supporting roles.
My focus is on late girls. I don’t dare to write too many supporting characters. For example, the plot of the Cen family. I try to avoid writing supporting characters and write them as group portraits. As a result, the result of writing is criticized as being too childish and unscientific. , this is also because I dare not write too many supporting roles QAQ
There are some big battles in the later chapters. I was worried that readers would be bored, and I didn’t dare to write about the game between forces. It also seemed very childish, as if the old ones didn’t exist and a few young characters were playing house.
Due to my foresight and foresight, my supporting characters are also very thin and cannot be gathered together. The lines are relatively scattered. I dare not spend more time on the supporting characters. I cannot arrange these complicated lines well. The role of Li Ban has not been written as I want. desired content.
Mu Xiaoxiao is a very important supporting character, and one that everyone hates. I don’t really like stories with vicious female supporting characters, because I think they are too violent.
When I was writing the article before, I wanted to portray Mu Xiaoxiao as an innocent and cute original heroine, but my **** friends suggested that I write a vicious female supporting role, which would be easy to slap in the face. Readers would like to read it, otherwise it would be inconvenient to slap in the face. On the one hand, I want to write as my **** friends say, but on the other hand, I can’t bring myself to create a vicious female supporting role. I really can’t hit a girl in the face so cruelly. It’s okay to write about male characters being abused and slapped in the face in various ways, but I can’t bring myself to slap them. The female character’s face.
Readers scolded her more and more, and in the later stages, I simply gave up and ignored it. I would do what other novels do to the vicious female supporting characters.
Then, because of this, I was criticized as a “woman-hater” and “worshiped” ORZ
Mu Xiaoxiao’s contradiction actually originated from the contradiction I wrote. I wanted to portray her as a vicious female supporting character, but I couldn’t. In the end, I chose the vicious female supporting character – the awakening growth line. However, as soon as she appeared on the scene, she caused public outrage, so I could only try to delete the relevant plot as much as possible to prevent her from appearing.
This is also a big shortcoming of mine. I am always influenced by readers.
Bai Yueguang’s writing put me under great pressure, and I often lay on the floor crying. After crying, I wiped my tears and continued writing. Moreover, Bai Yueguang’s comment section is very messy. I wanted to die many times when I read the comments. I turned on the gas tank at home, worried that the explosion would blow up my house and the neighbors’ houses and harm others. I thought about it and turned it off again. Later, I wanted to take that metronidazole with wine and burn charcoal, but I was worried that it would fall down instead of dying. Disability, in short, I have no courage, timidity and cowardice. There are many reasons for me to survive. My family is one of the reasons. Another very important reason is that the Jinjiang V article is not finished and I can only withdraw half of the money.
I thought that if I died, I wouldn’t be able to take out the remaining other half. I had suffered for so long because of this, and if I died and worked in vain, then I would be too miserable!
So I made up my mind to finish before I die! (No), when I wrote the scene about the ghost market, my dog got lost. I walked more than ten miles every day to look for the dog. I was so desperate that I cried every day. Because my condition was so bad, I mentioned it on Weibo. The sentence was not in good condition, and I was scolded for not being able to write well. I was really disappointed at that time! I felt hypocritically, wow, I was really wronged. I really tried my best to think about it, make outlines, reflect on myself, and bought a lot of related professional books.
My family took me to the hospital, where I saw a psychiatrist and got medication. The medication was really helpful. Now I don’t have much of a problem. By the time it’s over, I don’t want to die anymore! (Hey!)
I know that most readers actually don’t like the sub-CPs. I didn’t dare to write the lines between Xiu Quan and Jiang Rou, Ruyi and Yu Xingzhi. The writing of these two sub-CPs was a huge failure.
I really care about readers’ comments, especially after I came down from the mountain, there were a lot of negative comments. I wanted to please readers, but I often used the wrong method, and the comment area exploded again, making everything a mess.
For example, when Wanmei lost her memory, I arranged for Wanmei to lose her memory. First, I wanted to introduce modern skills, and secondly, I felt that after Wanmei used the Zhuxie Sword Manual, the feeling of pleasure reached a certain height, and it was difficult to feel good again. What follows is As for the war drama, I was afraid that readers would find it boring, so I wanted to write a plot of “the king dressed in bronze” in a different way, which would be more interesting. I didn’t expect that many people would abandon a large movie because of this.
There is also the bald guy joke mentioned above. I thought it would be more interesting, but I screwed it up seriously!
Talking back to the plot, Bai Yueguang is an upgrade stream. I reflected on it and thought that I should let the awesome characters appear slowly one by one. The Demon King appeared too early, and the ceiling appeared too early, and there was no sense of excitement in the upgrade stream. The excitement of the ORZ upgrade stream probably lies in the change in people’s attitudes in the surrounding environment after the status changes. Also, I didn’t set up the character’s skills well from the beginning, which made the subsequent battle scenes very awkward.
As for the male protagonist, I didn’t plan to set up a magical method at the beginning. It was the senior brother at first, then I thought about Xiao Pei, I thought about Xiao Bailong, and I even thought about Hall Master Ma as a joke. But there are also some problems with the creation of Miaofa. This character is a bit thin in comparison, so I didn’t dare to write. I kept using those labels over and over again, which made him not very down-to-earth and he felt very tool-like. There was no end to falling in love with my late sister. Later on, I wanted to change things and write more lively.
There is also the ending, I originally set it up, Fang Lingqing bento, senior brother Qi bento (died with painstaking efforts to deduce the secret of heaven) Meng Canglang and Baishan Lake died on the battlefield, Ruyi died for Yu Xingzhi, in short a lot of deaths . But this was too heavy and too newspaper-like. I finally thought about it and decided to use Wanmei’s amnesia to introduce some modern thoughts and knowledge to change everyone’s ending. What is presented is the current result.
I said before that the Mid-Autumn Festival extravaganza was in the middle time period, but later I made some changes to the timeline for this reason.
I have said more than once that I have no ambitions and do not want to write a big picture. I know my writing skills. Why I wrote war scenes is just to fill in the gaps in the previous article. In order not to make the article too heavy and write a group portrait, I deleted it. The scene where everyone is struggling to get lunch.
In the final analysis, this article is Wanmei’s personal growth history of blood and tears.
The original outline of this plot was that Shi Yuan came out and killed a wave of people. Everyone resisted and killed another wave. Everyone continued to resist, and after a wave of people died, they won. Such.
After changing the settings, the plot was not arranged properly, which may have made the ending of this plot hasty.
There are so many things I want to say, and I can’t think of them all in a moment, so I’ll just write them here for now, and I’ll add more later! !
Thank you for reading my article. I remember the IDs of many readers! I remember many familiar IDs! ! Also on Weibo are A Duan, Ji Xi, and all the wives of Wishing Star to the Nth Power! My second aunt who always supports me with smashing thunder, spits on you for being slow to update, Tang Mo grinds sugar…and Fuxi who always leaves messages and opens up the world with one painting, etc. I have almost hundreds of them memorized!
There are many girls who often appear and then disappear. Although they did not reach the finale, thank you for your willingness to read my article!