Whether Xiaobai’s Bai Xue will be successful or not depends on what he thinks, it must be recognized by the market.
“I have been sharpening my sword for ten years, but now is the time!”
Xiao Bai took the completed book “Fog Flower Dream” and showed it to Boss Mo, who was squatting in the corner smoking outside the kitchen door.
“What the hell?” Boss Mo only glanced at the cover and threw it away.
“Wipe you!” Xiaobai spat, hurriedly took the book back from the air, flipped through it and handed it to Boss Mo, saying: “Have a look and give me some advice.”
Boss Mo flicked the cigarette **** into the trash can with precision and impatiently picked up the book and started reading.
He went from turning the page with just a few glances to slowly savoring it, and the corners of his mouth were unconsciously raised, but it was still very fast. In less than a stick of incense, he closed the book, handed it to Xiaobai, and took it again. I picked up the second book handed over by Xiaobai.
It took a full hour to finish reading the whole book.
“Everything is good, great progress has been made. It’s just a problem with the character of the protagonist. First of all, that guy is not as great as you think. Changing “For the common people” to “being forced to be helpless” is just like him…”
“It’s fiction, how can it be the same everywhere.” Xiaobai said angrily.
“It can be false, but it cannot be too false. Excessive justice is too false. I don’t deny it. Since ancient times, there have been people who have dedicated their lives and retained their loyalty. But if you want to write a book with these people as the protagonists, do you think it will sell well?”
“This…”
“Your theme is love, so there shouldn’t be excessive righteousness. As a supporting role, the protagonist can be an upright person, but he must not be a person who gives up everything for the sake of the common people. You regard the two heroines as the protagonist It’s good to be a member of the common people so that he can understand this love, but you ignore that he himself is also a member of the common people.”
The young boy blushed, and then said depressedly: “It’s nonsense to copy or not, but this way the ending can’t be a tragedy!”
“What’s wrong if it’s not a tragedy?” Boss Mo sneered.
Xiao Bai said forcefully: “Love without tragedy cannot be unforgettable!”
Boss Mo’s sneer became even louder and he said: “As long as you are happy, let’s talk about the heroine. I don’t know what Fairy Chi is like, but I am sure that she is not Xue Baochai, and Ah Qi is not Lin Daiyu.”
“What Xue, Lin, it doesn’t matter, okay.” Xiaobai blushed again.
“As long as you are happy.” Boss Mo replied again, making Xiaobai feel depressed for a while.
Boss Mo lit a cigarette and said while smoking: “That guy is half of my informant.”
“Huh?” Xiaobai stared at Boss Mo curiously.
“He took the initiative to contact me, but I didn’t know about him.”
“Oh!” Xiaobai suddenly realized.
“Many of the cases I solved were directly related to him, but I couldn’t let him go just because of that. I still had to catch him, because that was my mission, and I should have followed it through without hesitation. However, in After I found out about his past, I felt very sad and didn’t know what to choose. I wanted to unburden myself several times for him. I had this kind of escape mentality, and he also had it, and it was heavier than me!”
Xiao Bai then understood why the boss’s feelings towards the senior were different from what the senior said about Sir Yang and Officer Tang.
“There is no love between them…” After Boss Mo finished speaking, he suddenly denied: “Maybe there is. In Ah Qi’s case, it’s just that Ah Qi’s memory has been altered. Whether it is true or not, we have no way of judging!”
After taking a puff of cigarette, Boss Mo continued: “He is not normal. Most of his male compatriots would only wish for it. But when Ah Qi faced him in this way, I only saw his disgust, so from now on He wanted to sever the relationship from the beginning, but Ah Qi’s insistence made him at a loss. He should, no, be sure that he had carefully considered this matter, definitely not just once, but many, many times, whether to stay together forever. You can also see the final decision on whether to change his life or not. He escaped.”
“Yeah!” Xiaobai nodded in agreement, but for some reason, he felt that he was not facing Boss Mo, but a senior. However, he didn’t care. The collection of materials was more important, so he hurriedly asked: “Do you think he was facing him at that time?” What’s your state of mind? Are you just leaving because you can’t figure out the truth?”
“It’s not just two words to put the real and the fake in someone’s body!” Boss Mo raised the corner of his mouth and said, “Do you feel that I look a lot like him at this moment?”
“Uh…you said that, it’s true. Just now I felt like I was talking to a senior.” Xiaobai said with a bitter smile.
“I am good at simulating the behavior and mentality of criminals, but I cannot imitate him. I can only imitate his appearance, but not his heart. There are too many people who have a worse fate than him. Compared with most orphans, he He was so lucky. He had an adoptive father who treated him sincerely and a similar growing environment to you and me. But because of this luck, he did not have the endurance that most orphans have. When he lost it, his world collapsed! ”
“Alas!” Xiaobai sighed and suddenly didn’t want to write anymore.
But Boss Mo suddenly encouraged him: “In addition to being righteous, the character you conceived is actually very close. He does look like Jia Baoyu who lost Lin Daiyu and encountered great changes in his family.”
“At the end of the dream, all realms are empty!” Xiaobai took a deep breath and sighed.
“In his world, there is no longer any truth or falsehood, only emptiness. The only motivation that can keep him alive is revenge. But his nature… It is his adoptive father who created his humanity and woven it into his only life. , but it deprived him of the reason to live!”
Xiao Bai squatted down next to Boss Mo, grabbed the cigarette next to him, took out one and lit it for himself, shook his head and said: “Don’t persuade others to be good without their suffering! Even if I have my cousin’s soul to protect me, He has also planted all kinds of evil thoughts, not to mention the senior who has nothing!”
“It’s hard to find love for such a person, let alone righteousness.”
“Oh, I suddenly don’t want to write anymore.” Xiaobai sighed again.
“Write, why don’t you write? If you don’t write, his life is not exciting enough.” Boss Mo actually advised.
“What?” Xiaobai didn’t quite understand. What does this have to do with the seniors’ lack of excitement in life?
“There are many people who don’t like him. Even if others say he is good, once you write about him, questions and resistance will come one after another. The more so, the more people will stop what he wants to do, and eventually… …”
“At the end of the dream, all realms will be empty!” Xiaobai grabbed the spot.
Boss Mo smiled and refilled his cigarette.
“That’s really a tragedy!” Xiaobai flipped through “Fog Flower Dream” and glanced back and forth at the characters “Sword Seven” and “Red Fairy”.
“But your ending must be happy for everyone.” Boss Mo’s words were like a needle pricking Xiaobai’s heart!
“Harem story!” Xiaobai took a deep breath of cigarette.
“No.” Boss Mo looked at him and denied: “Jian or Chi, find Shuyuan www.zhaoshuyuan.com and choose only one!”
“What do you mean? Does this mean everyone is happy?” Xiaobai couldn’t laugh or cry.
“There is nothing in the world that everyone likes. Even if it is money, some people hate it deeply, such as your senior.”
“Just kidding… uh, it seems so!” Xiaobai thought about it carefully and really felt that the senior was not just hating the rich!
“First, the story will be changed slowly in the future.”
Xiaobai will understand as soon as he hears it, this is going to be serialized.
He couldn’t help but take another long puff of cigarette, and his mouth was burned. He couldn’t help but make a sound, which shows how weak his body is under normal circumstances.
But he didn’t care about whether he was physically weak or not. He threw away the cigarette **** and said with a smile: “Okay, although we are one person, we have an independent personality in two parts. After all, it is the Queen who once helped the young master to conquer the world. , Scarlet Fairy is more popular, or the caring little girl Jian Qi who has now entered the heart of Gongziliu and cares about his well-being is better, let the world compete for it!”
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